This story is so deeply relatable and beautifully written. You captured that feeling of being present in the house but still feeling invisible perfectly - rushing with jalebis and cake for your brother's birthday while wearing your simple black t-shirt and incomplete makeup. It's strange how birthdays in our own homes can sometimes make us feel like the anonymous guest. That line "Maybe that's why your studies are ruined, I am unable to talk or move" hit me so hard. It shows how one comment can freeze you completely. Please continue this story, I really want to know what happens next. Your writing style is amazing.
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Back to the entryThis story is so deeply relatable and beautifully written. You captured that feeling of being present in the house but still feeling invisible perfectly - rushing with jalebis and cake for your brother's birthday while wearing your simple black t-shirt and incomplete makeup. It's strange how birthdays in our own homes can sometimes make us feel like the anonymous guest. That line "Maybe that's why your studies are ruined, I am unable to talk or move" hit me so hard. It shows how one comment can freeze you completely. Please continue this story, I really want to know what happens next. Your writing style is amazing.
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