Comments

This part is so gripping, Ravi trying to sit in the group study but his mind completely stuck on that dark mysterious road and everything he saw beyond comprehension, you built the tension so well. And the way you described his sharp pain across temples, blurry vision, unable to tolerate light and that burning on his back, I could actually feel his discomfort. Sagar noticing him and asking what is bothering you felt so natural and caring. And that last line where Sagar was in complete disbelief when he saw Ravi's back, what a cliffhanger, you left me wanting to read the rest immediately.

The mysterious encounter keeps getting scarier

I have heard stories where after a paranormal encounter, strange marks appear, either as scratches or bruises. I believe the ghost or paranormal entity did this to Ravi. Even the headache could have been because of the encounter, I cannot imagine what he had gone through.