From 'liability' to 'Identity'

Hello Readers actually one of friends wants to publish her magzine and she wants any types of write-up from us , so I have pen down something , please read and if you have something that I can add or remove so please do share in the comments.
(The poem is all about a woman's identity and some of the painful stages of her life)

She appeared and tagged as a 'liability,'
From blossoming home to a faded home she is the reason,
From beauty to duty she has to be faultless
Because she is a woman,
From "Pita to Pati" she is just a liability
And she has to suffer,
She can't fly, it has to be perfect within,
A plucked flower can't come to blows
But....

Now all bets are off ,she has smashed it's chrysalis,
A liability now has its own identity and hereafter, she won't suffer anymore,she won't cover anymore,
Now she is no more just a 'BAGGAGE'
Now she has her own 'ASTITVA'.

(So all of you who doesn't understand Hindi words, here is the meaning of those words. So please if you have any suggestions do share in that way I can make the poem more soothing)
1.Pita to Pati ~ Father to Husband.
2.Astitva~ Identity