The theme is really powerful, especially the transition from “liability” to “Astitva.” ❤️ I’d suggest polishing a few lines for smoother flow and keeping the imagery consistent, because the message of a woman reclaiming her identity deserves to stand out clearly. The Hindi words also add a beautiful touch to the poem.
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Back to the chapterThe theme is really powerful, especially the transition from “liability” to “Astitva.” ❤️ I’d suggest polishing a few lines for smoother flow and keeping the imagery consistent, because the message of a woman reclaiming her identity deserves to stand out clearly. The Hindi words also add a beautiful touch to the poem.
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